雅思小作文怎么写高分

雅思小作文怎么写高分

很多同学可能对雅思小作文不太重视，甚至是对小作文根本不加练习，只关注大作文。

句式的掌握

小作文句式的背诵与掌握是非常重要的。举个简单的例子，比如说我们想表达A在B方面从哪一年到哪一年急剧增长，那么这个时候我们就需要牢牢记住我们至少可以用两种句式来做，也就是一个是副词修饰动词：A increased dramatically in B from …to …，另一个就是用名词形式，我们用there be结构：There was a marked growth in A from …to …

除此之外，我们在大作文当中用到的句式多样性，在小作文当中同样使用，有的同学觉得小作文比较简单，字数也不多，所以不假思索的全部用简单句来写，这同样是不可取的。全部用简单句会给别人很急促、节奏太快的感觉，所以不论是大作文还是小作文我们都应该长句短句交替进行。

写作的重点

小作文写什么，这是很多考生头疼的一个问题。题目中会有大量的数据，这个我们根据题目的要求去做是最直接的解决办法。题目中会有这样的要求：Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 也就是说我们所需要写的是图表的主要特点，另外再需要比较的地方就一定要进行比较。掌握了这一点，再辅以我们的练习，我想在写作内容和重点的选取上我们就不会有太大的问题了。

数据的使用

小作文最明显的一个特征就是在图表型文章中会有大量的数据，我们除了要把它的主要特点趋势写出来，还要注意数据的引入。因为这类文章是说明文，只有你自己的说明文字，没有相关数据的引入，同样显得没有生气、缺乏说服力。

段落的分配

很多同学小作文得6分可能不那么难，但是得6.5或7分就有很大的难度，笔者认为段落的分配是起很大作用的，当然要保证你在以上四点都有很好的表现。我们非常清楚，小作文主要分三部分：开头段、主体段、结尾段，这是一个大纲。在主体段部分，如果你能根据具体的图表情况，把它有所组合，那么说明你在分析题目、分析数据的能力上要胜人一筹。也就是说，你可以根据具体情况，把变化形势相同或相近的放到一起去写，进行重新组合，这样的话，胜算就要大一些。

雅思写作有哪些失败的开头

一、中式英文

典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

二、用词不当表达不准

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

三、观点模糊态度暧昧

典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

四、偏离主题无轨电车

典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 【雅思真题】

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

意思重复原地踏步

典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

五、过分简单没有重点

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

雅思写作审题误区

一、对雅思作文题目中的关键词视而不见，凭想当然

不少同学对题目没仔细读清楚，看漏了或者虽然看到但没注意一些关键的字眼，而这些字眼往往是决定了文章的论述方向的。考生在没考虑到这些字词所规定的条件情况下，靠想当然的按自己的一套下笔洋洋洒洒写下去，结果自然是离题了。

例如：

Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

许多同学没有扣住Air transport来议论，只是泛泛地说增加出口【水果蔬菜】可带来的益处，如创造外汇收入，促进经济发展，提高GDP云云。题目说明了是Air transport，那就应该重点从空运被日益用来出口水果蔬菜的好处来论述，比如速度快了，最大限度地提高了保鲜程度，减少了腐烂变质的损耗，让商品的质量更有保障，更好地满足了进口国消费者的需求;

另外，空运的运输订单增多了，也促进了航空业的兴旺发展等等，这是赞同方的主要理由。而反对方的主要依据是空运使运输成本大大升高，导致在当地的零售价会上升，这样反而抑制了销量;此外，空运航班增多，增加了温室气体的排放，据估算，从新西兰空运水果去英国，每运送一公斤，就要向大气排放约相当于5公斤的温室气体。像这样按照题目所规定的条件和情况去论述，才能有的放矢，切中要害。

由此可见，要认真审读题目，特别注意那些关键词，才能找对思路，针对性地答好题目。

二、对雅思作文题目不理解，领会不了其要旨

有时学生们对题目的每一个字都读到了，且没有不懂的单词，但就是领会不了题目的意思，或者把题目理解错了，写下来自然是要偏题的。其原因往往是没有把题目中各部分的关系整体地去想一想，缺乏用常识、事理以及逻辑去分析理解题目的习惯。

例如：Nowadays, technology developments are causing environmental problems. Many people think that we should live a simpler life while others believe that technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

许多同学对这道题不知从何入手，分析题目给出的两种观点的时候，绕来绕去半天，说不到点子上。

雅思写作中怎样使句型多样化

在雅思写作学习当中，最好的方法是以简单句为基础，配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短，通常要加些附属成分，如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语，以及节缩成分。总之，雅思写作技巧作者可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别：

【1】 The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. 【并列分句【1】+2】

【2】 Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. 【现在分语短语+简单句】

【3】 In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. 【副词短语+并列分句【1】-【2】 】

【4】 There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. 【简单句+形容语短语】

【5】 As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. 【原因副词从句+主句】

【1】和【5】的句式最常见：如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗?

最后，看看这两个句子要怎样多样化呢?

【6】 The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

【7】 He felt very uneasy.

【a】 The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

【b】 The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

【c】 The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

【d】 Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

【e】 The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

【f】 It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

【g】 Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

【h】 The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

【i】 The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

【j】 When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

【k】 As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

【l】 The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

在上述12个句子中，【a】-【g】是简单句;

【h】是并列句;【i】-【l】是复杂句。

简单句除【b】和【g】之外，其他五样，用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是【j】和【k】这两款;接着便是并列句【h】。如果大多数人的句子只限于【b】,【g】,【h】, 【j】和【k】这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜。