雅思大作文怎么写得多

雅思大作文怎么写得多

雅思写作对作文的字数要求是很严格的，小作文不少于150字，大作文不少于250个字。作文要求只给了下限，很多烤鸭就觉得，写多一些就可以了。

1有逻辑有条理地组织论点

一篇文章只有一个立场，但是论点可以有几个。那么这几个论点如何排列，哪个在前哪个在后呢?这些是有讲究的，同学们不能想到哪写哪儿。下面的段落是学生的例文，其中就存在论点排列的问题

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

这段文字的中心内容是网络学习存在的问题。论点包括两个，学生的自律和网络的内容。关于学生自律的问题有两句话，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.这两句话有相关性，但是却被网络那句话隔开了。这样会给读者造成阅读的障碍，降低文章的流畅度。所以重新调整这几句话的位置，就可以很快解决这个问题。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

2连接手段使用得自然多样

论点之间如何连接?有哪些连接手段?下面这个段落的中心内容是看电视太多产生的问题，共有三个论点。所使用的连接手段是正确有效的，但是单一，少变化。每一个论点之间都使用了副词做连接词，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是对照版本。其中使用了代词，副词和形容词等多种连接手段，而且做到了自然衔接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

3段落的中心内容与中心句

一个段落只有一个中心思想，这个中心思想通常会体现在一个总结性的句子当中，这句话叫做中心句。中心句在学术文章中常常落在段首，以方便阅读。中心句如同射击的靶子，要直指文章主题，这样后面的论点才不会偏离题目，因此非常重要。上面关于看电视太多的段落，中心句就写的非常明确。下面再给同学们一些句子，可以灵活应用于立论段，即证明自己观点的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于让步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in …

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose…

Of course there are some opposite voices against…

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting…

4指示代词的准确使用

中文和英文在指示代词上有较大的区别。中文习惯重复名词，而英文则强调用代词。如‘我今天把钱包丢了，我那个钱包可好看了。’而相对应的英文表达是使用代词而不再重复钱包这个名词， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流畅度高的文章指示代词使用正确，指向清楚。下面这两句话当中有两个代词it，但是存在指代不清的问题：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一个it指代后面whether从句，后一个it指代government.为了理清关系，减少模糊，最好不用形式主语这个句型，而是直接把主语从句放在主语的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

雅思写作经典句型

【1】 It deserves /merits our attention that

【2】 Notably / Noticeably ，It is noticeable/ notable/manifest / evident that

【3】 It is advisable/ suggested that+学生应该需要学习音乐和体育，

【4】 It is a well-established fact that +句子 ，It is universally acknowledged that + 句子

【5】Ample / rich /countless evidence propels me to consider that +句子

【6】Both empirical experience and Academic knowledge enables me to argue that

【7】It is far from inconceivable / incomprehensible that+句子

【8】 The role of sth cannot be underemphasized/ignored / overlooked. 【 总结句】什么的作用是不容小视/忽略/忽视。

The role of practical subjects，such as marketing and creative writing，cannot be underemphasized.

【9】With the help of sb / sth ，+句子. Without xxxx，sb would never，never have done sth【重要性】

With the help of mobile phones，businessmen can easily communicate with clients around the world. Without these technological gadgets， they will never， never have reaped so much material wealth

借助于xxxx的帮助，某人能怎么样

With the help of study about history，many students are able to sharpen their analysis skill. Without it，students would never have achieved a superb leap in academic ability.

如何写出一篇不低于6分的雅思作文

步骤一：审题，找出题目的要求，从而完成评分描述“TaskAchievement” 第一条 therequirements of the task 【<2分钟】

具体来看：阅读文字部分shows后面信息，找出题目的topic, time,place。阅读图表的标题、横轴与纵轴的文字信息，尤其注意纵轴单位、图标内的对象所包含的文字信息。

步骤二：观察数据，找出主要特征和能证明这些特征的关键点。 【<3分钟】表格题和柱状图这些多数据的图表出现频率相当高，怎样根据数据的异同来对繁多的数据进行有效分类，并归纳出每一类别的共性，成了当前评判作文能否在“TaskAchievement”进入6分的标准。

步骤三：文章撰写 【15分钟左右】当前小作文的写作常用大纲：题目改写【引出topic】，对象分类【表明写作思路】;重申主要特征：或指出某个未提及的特点。

步骤四：检查【1分钟】

此时，不宜做大的修改，把笔误的部分改掉即可。一般语言水平在大学四级左右的考生，根据本文的步骤，重点关注第一第二步，必能在考试中取得至少6分的佳绩。

雅思写作语法的易错点

第一易错点

Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.

错误分析：可数名词不可“裸用”。

在正式英文写作里，凡是常规的可数名词，必须在前面有限定词，比如冠词a/an/the，物主代词my/their/your等等，指示代词this/that等等。否则，这个可数名词就必须用复数。而在这个句子中government要么用the government，要么用government，后面的teacher和student都一样要加上复数。

因此，这个句子要改成：The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.

第二易错点

Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

错误分析：英语中动词原形是不能作主语的。

而且在这个句子中如果work做了动词，后面can enhance也是动词，就出现双谓语的情况，因此把work改成working.

因此，这个句子要改成：Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

第三易错点

Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

错误分析：词性使用错误。

different的词性为形容词，而修饰形容词或者动词的时候应该用副词。

因此，这个句子要改成：Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.

第四易错点

A lot of houses were collapsedin the earthquake.

错误分析：句中出现双谓语。

句中collapse已经为动词，再加be动词之后就变成了被动结构，此处be纯属多余。

因此，这个句子要改成：A lot of housescollapsedin the earthquake.

第五易错点

Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.

错误分析：当我们用到代词的时候，就一定要看所指代的名词的单复数，根据名词的单复数来使用相应的代词。

因此，这个句子要改成：Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.