雅思小作文结尾段怎么写

雅思小作文结尾段怎么写

雅思作文，无论是开头还是结尾，都是比较重要的，好的开头能够吸引考官，好的结尾也能够更好地概括全篇内容，做出总结。

通常来说，小作文的结尾分为两种不同的情况。

如果是单图，也就是一个图的话，结尾不是必要的，可以选择不写。如果还差一些字数不够，可以写写对图表的总结，例如图表总的趋势或总的特征。

如果是两个图，也就复图，需要总结两个图的关系，如果不写的话，是要扣分的哦。

所以说，需不需要写结尾要看情况而定，顺便提醒下，大作文的结尾一定要写。

雅思写作失分原因

同学们的文章实际长这样：

a. Universities usually limit the quantity of new students as well as their genders to create more effective performances of their students with regard to this gender trait. 【5分学生作品】

句子乍一看没有语法问题，但词语之间的逻辑混乱，导致理解障碍;

或者长这样：

b. Secondly, even though using distance-learning programmes could provide any person with opportunities to learning knowledge in anywhere. While the computer or the study material post only can offer a correct answer or explain to students, the comprehension capability of every student varies from student to student, make it impossible for the computer to offer and explain catered to a students’ particular level of understanding.【5分学生作品】

复杂句和简单句都存在许多问题，写作评分在5分段。

上面的句式绝对不简单，但是不是有一种看起来很高级、却完全读不懂的感觉?

我们可以发现5分考生们的句式不但不简单，还非常复杂，问题更多的是出在了句子的逻辑通顺和理解上。

雅思写作基本原则

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.

简洁是英文写作的灵魂，为了做到这一点，要学会去掉所有无关的信息，同时还要学会精简表达，一件事情能用一个词说清楚就坚决不用两个词。

烤鸭们需要明白communication, accuracy, complexity在雅思写作中的优先顺序：

综合来看，communication【即表达清楚意思，考官看得懂】是根本;

任何牺牲communication的高级表达都是耍流氓，分数不会超过6分，a和b两位同学都在这里掉了链子;

其次是accuracy表达正确，比表达高级来的更加重要。如果能做到这两点，再能适当的使用complex sentences，就能起到画龙点睛的作用，语法果断上6分，甚至冲7分。

雅思写作高分和复杂句

c. First of all, studying in school allows students to arrange their time reasonably to ensure efficient learning. Teachers in school provide fixed time table for studying. By contrast, study time via Internet is rather flexible; students have the freedom to study by themselves, but for students who lack self-control, their learning task might stay unfinished when the deadline comes.

【烤鸭6分习作】

雅思写作要上6分，语法要多难，究竟该不该使用复杂句?我们来看一下c同学平时联系作业【最终雅思写作考分6.5】：

相比之下，c同学的写作句式完全没有上面复杂，但是意思清楚，合理运用连接词，文章的论证逻辑基本合理。

综上，我们可以得出结论：雅思写作最主要的是要表达清晰，逻辑清楚，不需要过分追求长难句。

雅思写作技巧之议论文的折中写法

【1】 权衡利弊

这类方法适用于讨论"advantages & disadvantages"的题目。只需要在主体段分别论述考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后，在结尾段提出“优缺点都有，我们要权衡利弊”这样的观点。例如：

The advantages brought by the wide spread of mobile phones will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

主题段分别论述手机的利弊之后结尾段可以这样提出折中观点：

To put it in a nutshell, it is difficult to tell whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not regarding the wide spread of using mobile phones. What we may have to consider is how to make full use of this technological progress while staying away from its drawbacks.

【2】 双管齐下

很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点，通常会有讨论双方观点并给出自己观点的提问要求。这时候题中出现的两种观点看上去完全相反，但其实并不矛盾，可以用“双管齐下”的思路来提出观点。例如：

Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后，结尾段可以这样提出折中方案：

We should try to reach a balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I insist the government plays a crucial role. Actually, many cities have made effective and efficient development strategies to successfully attract numerous visitors while at the same time preserving their local cultures and traditions.

【3】 视情况而定

有时在分别论述完两个观点后，可以提出“同意哪方观点要取决于……”这样的折中观点，比如：

Some people think that all lawbreakers should be taken into prison, others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

在讨论完两种不同惩罚方式之后，结尾段可以这样提出观点：

From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether lawbreakers should be taken into prison or punished by other alternatives. It largely depends on different circumstances of crimes. But what remains undoubted is that we should take lawbreakers seriously who are major threat to social stability.

【4】 提出方案

双方讨论型文章中的两种观点虽相互矛盾，但很多情况其实是可以通过某种方法“化解矛盾”的，例如这道考题：

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned by government, while others believe that people should be free to choose sporting activities they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

在主体段讨论完禁止危险运动和自由选择运动的利弊之后，我们可以提出这样一种解决方案：

The best solution, therefore, is not to ban but to limit and protect. The government should improve the sport equipments in order to ensure participators' safety. Meanwhile, age limitation to certain sporting activities is also indispensable, excluding adolescents and senior citizens.

雅思写作常用动词用法

一、谓语动词的时态

【1】The graph shows that skateboarding or rollerblading was less popular among children.

改正：was——is

译文：图表表明滑板或轮滑在孩子中不那么受欢迎。

解析：本句所在的图表中没有提及时间，不必使用过去时。

【2】For another, web games are really prevalent among students, which made them neglect their studies.

改正：made——makes

译文：另一方面，网络游戏深受学生欢迎，这会使得他们忽视自己的学习。

解析：网络游戏的盛行，是一种现状，用一般现在时表述即可。

二、谓语动词的语气/语态

【1】If the government is encouraged to cover the complete fees, higher education would develop more equally.

改正：is encouraged——were encouraged/should be encouraged

译文：如果鼓励政府承担所有的学费，高等教育发展将会更公平。

解析：本句是虚拟语气。If从句的动词与将来相反，be动词应该使用were;或动词改成should+动词原形。

【2】In spite of the society now is fully advocated that a equal between the men and women, the ratio of the works is still unable to make it realized.

改正：In spite of——Although;advocated——advocating;that a equal——an equality;the works——jobs

译文：尽管现代社会完全提倡男女平等，但是工作的比例问题仍旧不能够确保这种平等实现。

解析：in spite of+名词性短语，although后面接让步状语从句;the society与advocate之间是主动关系，用主动语态;advocate后面跟的是名词短语作宾语，不是宾语从句，that没有必要，且在名词短语中，equal是形容词，需要改成名词;works表示泛指，且是不可数名词，应该去掉the，改成jobs或者work。