雅思作文写不出来怎么办
发布时间:2022-05-12 16:14:43雅思作文写不出来怎么办
思路是雅思大作文考试的源泉,没有思路在有限的时间内考生很有可能无法下笔写出符合字数要求的文章来。
最重要的是,大家平时一定要尽可能多地去练习雅思写作的常见考题,这样到考试的时候才不会对写作题目感到陌生。以下是雅思考试写作的常见话题,大家依次看一下,试着对每个话题进行内容方面的扩展,然后在写作文的时候展开讨论。
Animal Rights:
testing on animals, vegetarianism, zoos
Cities:
urbanisation, problems of city life
Crime:
police, punishments/prisons, rehabilitation, capital punishment
Education:
studying abroad, technology in education, education in developing countries, higher education, home-schooling, bad behaviour, corporal punishment, single sex education, streaming 【grouping children according to ability】
Environment:
global warming, impact of humans on the environment, solutions to environment problems, waste/rubbish, litter, recycling, nuclear power
Family:
family size, working parents, negative effects on children, divorce, care for old people
Gender:
gender and education, gender and work, women’s and men’s role in the family
Genetic Engineering:
positives, negatives, genetically modified foods
Global Issues:
problems in developing countries, how to help developing countries, immigration, multi-cultural societies, globalisation
Government and Society:
what governments can do, public services, censorship, video cameras in public places
Guns and Weapons:
gun ownership and possession, police and guns, nuclear weapons, armed forces
雅思写作如何写出新意
写好虎头凤尾
大作文开头段往往要包含如下几个关键内容,即,介绍背景,引出有争议的话题,阐述对立观点和陈述作者自己的观点。无论使用还是不使用模板,这几个关键信息是一定要包含在开头段落当中的,不然云里雾里,只能是适得其反。
首先It is quite common these days.。。介绍背景,或者用The issue of ... is a complex and sensitive one。这样的句型来引出有争议话题,然后千篇一律地分别介绍对立双方观点,如Some individuals believe that..., while others hold the view that....终用Personally, I agree with....至此,内容上完美无瑕,但恐怕考官心中已经大大打下“模板”两个字的烙印,这无疑对于想取得6分及以上的同学不利的事情。
下面,我们就来说说到底应该如何突破“模板病”。
例如,一道雅思写作高频题目,参考的题目是有关人们认为对于罪犯不应该只是关在监狱里,而应该对他们进行教育和劳动改造这样一道题目。我们依然给出这样一段:
How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face。【引出有争议的话题】Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done. Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.
这一段在观点描述上是“出于模板而胜于模板”的典范,范文中将观点一演变为“传统上,人们都采取关监狱这种方法”,这就用陈述事实的方式,巧妙避讳了直接表达有些人认为应该把犯人关在监狱里;而观点二以及作者观点合并为一句,用一个and巧妙连接成一个并列句。开头段关键信息一网打尽。
结尾段:
雅思写作结尾怎么准备?在进行雅思写作结尾部分撰写时,可以使用“回顾全文+观点+展望”的形式来准备。这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由“三个要素”组成,其中第2个要素是必须的,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。
首先来看一个例子:
To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increasedlevels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if allits people are educated to the maximum of their ability.
这个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。
谨防模板扣分
雅思写作模板的错误利用:语篇衔接不自然,语言老套,没有新意。
雅思写作模板如何利用?学生在平时的练习当中应该注意悟积累适合自己的套句,参考优秀模版的谋篇布局,注意收集相关的起承转合的佳句,然后根据自身水平,把这些模版通过“个性整容”,在考试中不留痕迹地运用出来,达到事半功倍的效果。
自制例句范文
如何突破雅思写作模板通过自制例句范文获得?众所周知,双边结构主要有两个方面的特征:考题文字中的观点双向和考生对观点支持角度的双边讨论,但好不要模棱两可,应该有明确的单一指向性的观点倾向。
同样地,对于判断作文的结构类型,应该不是大的问题,我们关心的是,考生太过依赖所谓的模板,而使得文章没有灵活度,否则,期望通过所谓捷径来快速取得理想的分数往往会适得其反。
雅思写作时遇到不会写的单词怎么办
方法一:反义正解比如这句话:他是个勤劳的人。这句话中“勤劳”可能很多同学不太会拼diligent,甚至会拼成delegent。但是通过反义正解的方法,比如:他不是懒惰的人=他是个勤劳的人,“懒惰”这个单词大家都知道是lazy,所以not lazy=diligent。
可能大家觉得这个例子比较简单,我们可以看这句话:在现在的生活中,压力是不可避免的因素。
“不可避免”查字典的话会有如下的单词:inevitable/unavoidable/indispensable,这些单词基本都是6级词汇,对于高中生来说是比较难背的。但通过反义正解的话,不可避免=必要/必须的=necessary,这句话就很好表达了。
再如这个例子:
父母经常忽视孩子的成长。“忽视”一般译为neglect/ignore。
忽视=不重视。
父母经常不重视孩子的成长。
Parents often do not pay much attention to the growing of children.
方法二:具体解释大家可能在电视节目上看到过“我来比划你来猜”的节目,其实就是对词语的解释,其实这个方法也可以用在雅思写作中,比如这个例子:
政府应该提供资助给难民。“资助”译为sponsor/subsidize,“难民”译为refugee。这两个单词属于六级词汇,如果用具体解释的方法,资助可拆分为资=金钱上的=financial,助=帮助=help;难民=遭受灾难的人=the people who were suffered from disaster.
这句话就可以很容易地翻译出来:
The government should provide financial support/help for the people who were suffered from disaster.
再通过几个例子练习一下:
例1:虐待儿童的人应该受到惩罚。“虐待”译为maltreat。
虐待=残忍地=不好地=坏地对待The people who treat children cruelly/badly should be punished.
例2:房价开始轻微地开始下降。“轻微地”译为slightly。
轻微=以缓慢的速度The price of house start to decrease at a slow rate.
例3:人们应该努力在生态平衡的问题上做出贡献。“生态平衡”译为ecological balance。
生态平衡=人与自然地平衡People should make great efforts to the problem on the balance between human beings and nature.
雅思作文如何拓展
什么部分需要拓展?
雅思考试中的议论文,通常遵循introduction-body-conclusion【引言段-主体段-结论段】的“三部曲”。一般来说,重要的是主体段落,其在雅思作文评分中也有很大的比重。我们来看一篇满分作文【9分】的评分标准:
“presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas”。
这里的“fully extended / well supported”,就必须通过主体段来体现啦。
如何进行拓展?
雅思培训老师此前和大家分享过,想要写出条理清晰的议论文,好是采用中心句【topic sentence】+支持句【support sentences】的结构来进行丰满。而每一篇文章中至少要有两个主要段落,分两个观点来进行表达,这样也比较容易达到字数要求。
至于这两个重要部分应该怎么写?评分标准很重要!
1.Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.
每个主体段都必须有一个明确的主题句。
2.Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.
支持句必须围绕主题句展开。
各位烤鸭请划重点:每一个段落好都采用总-分的结构来进行描写,就是一个主题句+若干个支持句,不要忘记每一段的总-分结构需要“嵌入”到整篇文章的总-分结构中哦~
说到这里,我们来上例子:
Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.
这段话的topic sentence很明显-“Hobbies are important for many reasons”,
之后的支持句从三方面阐述hobby的重要性【first, second, third】,并用Finally进行段落总结。
但段中这句话"A person can also meet other people by going the school"与hobby重要的原因没有关系,因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性,应该被去掉。
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