雅思小作文跑题怎么办

雅思小作文跑题怎么办

在考生写作之前，审题是必须要操作的步骤，而且也是关乎作文分数最为关键的一环。

要点一：涵盖题目所有要求

在写这篇文章时，考生如果只是简单的罗列堆砌，不做任何的分析、概括和比较，扣分就难以避免了。所以说还是要提醒大家注意要明确雅思写作要求，多总结雅思写作题目。

因此，考生在复习备考阶段不要盲目地练写文章，要多训练提高信息归类和概括能力。

要点二：结构清楚合理

结构清楚，从文章整体来说是讲一篇文章起码要有开头、中间和结尾，每个中间段要有一句主题句总整段，下面依次展开，后有一句话收尾。结构合理则是指文章的论证结构合理，特别是作文，立场要非常清晰。

在写文章时，考生首先就要鲜明地提出自己的观点，之后在过渡段里提及与自己意见不同的论点，说明理由是什么，其后放主要的笔墨论证自己的观点，可以结合亲身经历或了解到的实例来证明观点的正确性，后进行总结陈述，进一步确认自己观点和意见。

在备考雅思时，考生要注意文章结构的建立，力求做到结构清楚、论证比例合理。

要点三：词汇运用丰富、灵活

新评分标准大的改变是把老评分标准的第三方面“词汇和语法”分解成词汇和语法两个细则。这样一来，词汇和语法、任务完成或任务反应、连贯与衔接在评分时的权重是一样的。所以，要获得雅思作文，同时也要在词汇上狠下功夫才行。

在词汇的准备方面，要注意宽度和难度两方面的训练。词汇的宽度是指在一篇要求字数的文章内，能用不同的语言表达同一个内容，避免重复。词汇的难度，是指在文章中是选用比较幼稚的词汇，还是有一定文体标准、适合于学术场景表达的词汇。

雅思大作文主体段写作技巧

一：举实例

思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!

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更多句型：

To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二：做比较

方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的;

世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点【through comparison】和不同点【through contrast】。下面是一些短语：

相似的比较：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

三：换言之

没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字Ilove you!

I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.

I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.

或者上面我们举过的例子：

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.

因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.

更多短语：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.

雅思写作常见的语法错误

1. 双谓语错句

e.g. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型，因为句中的be动词已经是谓语，而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分，故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”，根据上面的分析，were应该是谓语，而study for career应该是定语从句，因此，例句应修正改成：

For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.应改成：

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

2. 句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主语是the most popular kind of transport，谓语动词【系动词】是was， 而by road按照语法应该是方式状语，此句缺乏表语。应改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits， which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories， 不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思，应改为：

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

3. 主系表结构使用错误

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干结构是：we are impossible“我们是不可能”，表意不对。这种表达在英语中对应的句型是：It is…for…to…， 所以应该改成：

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

类似的错误例句还有：People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.

雅思写作中的常用连接词有哪些

第一、And并列关系

【and】in addition/and/similarly/likewise/as well as/besides/furthermore/also/moreover/too/not only … but/even/besides this/that

第二、Sequence顺序 【then】

出现的时候表示列举

first/initially/second etc./to begin with/then/next/earlier/later/following this/that/afterwards

第三、Consequence结果 【so】

前面是后面的结果/也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了

as a result/thus/so/therefore/consequently/it follows that/thereby/eventually/in that case/admittedly

第四、Contrast转折 【but 】

表对前面论述的转折/一般后面才是作者观点

however/on the other hand/despite/in spite of/though/although/but/on the contrary/otherwise/yet/instead of/rather/whereas/nonetheless/in contrast

第五、Certainty确定 【of course】

强烈的确定/后面是作者的坚定论点

obviously/certainly/plainly/of course/undoubtedly

第六、Condition条件/ 因为 【if 】

后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。

if/unless/whether/provided that/Given that /for/so that/whether/depending on

第七、Time时间 【when】

before/since/as/until/meanwhile/at the moment/when/whenever/as soon as/just as

第八、Summary总结 【in a word】

作者的最后总结

in conclusion/in summary/lastly/finally/to sum up/to conclude/to recapitulate重述/in short/in a word

第九、Example举例 【for example】

for example/for instance/just as/in particular/such as/namely也就是

第十、Reason原因 【because】

since/as/so/because 【of】/due to/owing to/the reason why/in other words/leads to/cause