雅思Table作文怎么写

雅思 table作文怎么写

雅思大作文写作一直是雅思考生在备考雅思的过程中比较难攻克的一个部分。

1.框架

文章形成之初，考生内心须生出框架，作为整个文章的支撑。我们将180字的小作文【官方要求数据为150字】分为三个部分【当然并不等于三个段落】：Introduction, Main body and Conclusion。

1】. Introduction

首段为介绍段，需要告诉考官整个文章的内容，是关于什么样的数据的表格题，而题目恰恰是告诉我们这个内容的，所以最为节约时间且正确的写作方法就是对题目进行paraphrase。

表格图可以分为两种题型：一静态图，仅对数据进行表述，不涉及数据的变化，以C4T1为例：

TEST 1: The table below shows the proportion of different categoriesof families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

此题仅对数据特征进行描述，不包含动态变化过程，所以在对题目进行改写时中心词为百分比：proportion, percentage, rate and

breakdown。改写包含两部分：同义词替换和句式改写，目标为不能错过信息点，需要所有的信息点完整。以下为改写后的题目：

The table chart reveals the breakdown of different kinds ofimpoverished families in Australia in 1999.

另一种为数据变化图，涉及数据的改变，以C10T2为例：

TEST 2: The table below gives information about sales ofFairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europeancountries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

此题目涉及数据变化，为动态表格，所以对数据进行描写时中心词为change,改写依然包括同义词替换和句式改写，当然信息点不可缺少。以下为改写后的题目：

The charts reveal the change in theamount of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in 5 European countriesduring the period from 1999 to 2004.

2】. Main body

主体部分需要对数据进行逻辑分析，并不仅仅是对考官罗列的数据完全描述。针对于第一种情况，由于不涉及数据的变化，我们只需对数据进行分类，在分好的类别内进行对比比较描写就好。分类的第一步为排序，可根据需要按照从小到大或从大到小的顺序进行，若有平均值，则平均值为切入点。若是图表当中给予过多数据，则须选取主要信息进行描写，主要信息包含：最大值、最小值、特殊关系的值【half,

double, triple and fourfold】。

第一类：以C4T1为例，如上图，本表格最后一行为all

households,所有的家庭类别，此为平均值，所以11%为我们的切入点。按照从大到小的顺序将整个表格的数据排列出来为：

sole parent; single, no children

couple with children, couple without children

single aged person, aged couple

根据排列好的数据，自然而然就将数据分成三部分进行描述【主体部分为三个段落】。

第二类：以C10T2为例，涉及数据变化量

如上图，本题共有两个图表，则每个图表为主体部分的一个段落。如果按照以上思路，先就每一列进行排序描写，则一个图中的5个国家都要进行两遍描写，太过重复，所以针对于有数据变化的表格，可就变化量从大到小进行排序，则两个表格分别排序如下：

第一个Table:

UK

Switzerland

Denmark, Sweden

Belgium

第二个Table:

Switzerland, UK

Belgium【上升】

Sweden

Denmark【下降】

排序后分类明显，图一根据变化量的多少可分为四个类别，而图二根据上升或下降自然而然分为两类，这些分类决定了段落句子与句子之间的构成。此为主体部分的分析部分，不同的表格题型采取不同的分析方法。

3】. Conclusion

结尾段为总结总体特征，依然以两种表格为例。

C4T1不涉及数据变化，可以只总结总体特征，比如说所占比最大的是谁，比例最少的是哪个单项，或者将各项分类进行对比。

那么本题我们可如此总结：

Overall,the table suggests that households of single adult and those with children weremore likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

C10T2因涉及数据变化，且有两个图表，总结段就需总结总体特征，即图一和图二之间的关系，本题可如此总结：

Overall,it is clear that sales figures for both products had risen across the board,except for Sweden and Denmark which recorded drops in banana sales during the 5years.

而从改写完题目到分析完数据，大概花费考生4~5分钟的时间。接下来，就是将分析好的数据用比较地道的语言表达出来。

内容填充先从句式开始。C4T1因不涉及数据变化，在表达时通常先说明特征，再列举数据：

Couplesgenerally tended to be better off, with lower poverty level for couples withoutchildren 【7%】 than those with children 【12%】. Older people were generally lesslikely to be poor, though once again the trend favored elderly couples 【only 4%】rather than single elderly people 【6%】.

以上两个句子，虽然都包含特征和数据两种信息，但却是两种句式：简单句和复合句。

而数据列举经常运用的句式还包括：

1】. It做形式主语的主语从句：It is noticeable that for both types ofcouples with children, a higher than average proportion were living in povertyat this time.

2】.Than用来表对比：

Householdsof single adult and those with children were more likely to be living inpoverty than those consisting of couples.

C10T2因涉及数据变化及数据对比，常用的为4大句式：

The sales of coffee in UK increasedfrom 1.5 million euros in t999 to 20 million in 2004. The UK experienced anincrease in the sales of coffee from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million in2004. The 5 years witnessed an increase in the sales of coffee from 1.5 millioneuros in 1999 to 20 million in 2004.There was an increase in the sales ofcoffee from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million in 2004.

除了此常用句式之外，还有表示对比比较的句式：

Intwo places sales increased by the same small amount: 1.8~2 million euros inDenmark, and 0.8-1 million in Sweden. The increment was slightly larger inBelgium, from 1~1.7 million euros.

在句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间加上适当的连接词，让句子之间的关系更加明确，段落与段落联系得更加紧密，这便是一篇符合官方评分标准的文章了，而整篇文章的表达时间要控制在15分钟之内，这样考生才可在20分钟内完成一篇逻辑清晰、表达地道的小作文。

雅思满分作文语言特点

1平行结构多

Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.

这句话考官用两个动词调节语气，词汇准确，而且修辞上头韵的效果，大家多收集意思相近的动词，动词的排列是很体现语言水平的。

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time

形容词+名词的排列，意思上表达全面，语感上佳。

The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests

名词的排列特别注意下意思的递进。逻辑全面性的体现。

2围绕中心词写出长修饰

In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as smoking, drinking or even eating junk food?

上海雅思培训老师表示，大家一定要培养宾语的扩展能力，写出中心名词后，用定语从句进行修饰。这是英汉之间语言的大区别。英语是先给中心词，后面加上修饰。中文习惯定语放在名词的前面。文中中心词是activity，后面是拓展部分。

3谓语动词多样化处理

Rather than banning these sports， governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.

多个谓语动词处理有两种方式，一个是连接词衔接，动词原形排列，一个非谓语表达【to do/doing/done】体现多样性。但是，大家一定要注意非谓语的排列顺序会有逻辑效果，所以要格外严谨。

we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.

非谓语表达强调结果的逻辑。

4插入语多见

If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if necessary, obtain the legally required license

插入语是有难度的手艺，需要有积累，位置摆的要有讲究。既要考虑语法，又要兼顾意思。需要长期练习。

5状语处理

介词是英语的灵魂，介词引导状语是考官的惯用手段。介词的搭配和位置是英语写作的重点难点，一个人对于介词的驾驭直接体现语言水平。状语可以丰富句意，意思上更加全面。这是语言严谨性，逻辑性的直接体现。主要是时间，地点，方式，条件，目的等等。

One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.【伴随状语】

If there were easy-to

reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.【地点状语】

This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.【at时间状语细节展示】

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.【as引导原因状语】

6概念到具体的过程

The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

细节化的展示是雅思作文的特点。从抽象到具体，从概括到细节。大家要学会这种演绎法的思路。

Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.

雅思写作7分与5分表达的区别

以同一个句子三种表达为例大家琢磨琢磨吧：

1. Interestingly, the newer metro systems are much shorter than the older ones.

2. It is interesting to note that the more recently established metro systems are far shorter than the older ones .

3. One interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established systems are considerably shorter than the older ones.

再来三句：

1. It is also important to note that more girls go to high school in all parts of the world except East Asia.

2. It is also worth noting that females are more likely to attend second school in all regions except East Asia.

3. Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia.

以上是雅思写作5分句式和和7分句式的区别。通过上面的例子，大家就可以看到，在句式的表达上，雅思写作5分和7分之间不仅仅是词汇的区别，更有语法和结构上的不同。所以大家在备考雅思写作的时候向着7分努力吧。