雅思作文没思路怎么办

发布时间:2022-05-12 16:31:18

雅思作文没思路怎么办

很多同学表示,在写雅思大作文的时候,不知道该说些什么,想不到很好的Ideas。

雅思写作的准备,应该从内容、结构、语言三方面来进行。首先要研读历年考题,特别是03年以后的真题,了解考题的题型和题材,特别是对于自己不熟悉的话题进行有针对性的准备。写作没有思路,主要是想得太少,还有看得太少。思路要丰富,一方面可以和同学一起探讨,另一方面,可以把题目里的关键词放到google的搜索框里进行搜索,寻找相关话题。

最重要的是,大家平时一定要尽可能多地去练习雅思写作的常见考题,这样到考试的时候才不会对写作题目感到陌生。以下是雅思考试写作的常见话题,大家依次看一下,试着对每个话题进行内容方面的扩展,然后在写作文的时候展开讨论。

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Animal Rights: testing on animals, vegetarianism, zoos

Cities: urbanisation, problems of city life

Crime: police, punishments/prisons, rehabilitation, capital punishment

Education: studying abroad, technology in education, education in developing countries, higher education, home-schooling, bad behaviour, corporal punishment, single sex education, streaming 【grouping children according to ability】

Environment: global warming, impact of humans on the environment, solutions to environment problems, waste/rubbish, litter, recycling, nuclear power

Family: family size, working parents, negative effects on children, divorce, care for old people

Gender: gender and education, gender and work, women’s and men’s role in the family

Genetic Engineering: positives, negatives, genetically modified foods

Global Issues: problems in developing countries, how to help developing countries, immigration, multi-cultural societies, globalisation

Government and Society: what governments can do, public services, censorship, video cameras in public places

Guns and Weapons: gun ownership and possession, police and guns, nuclear weapons, armed forces

Health: diet, exercise, state health systems, private healthcare, alternative medicine, stress

Housing and Architecture: state housing, old buildings, modern/green buildings

International Language: English as an international language

Money: money and society, consumerism

Personal Development: happiness, success, nature or nurture

Sport and Leisure: professional/competitive sport, sport salaries, sport and politics

Tourism: positives, negative effects on environment, future of tourism

Traditions and Modern Life: losing traditional skills, traditional customs

Transport: traffic problems and solutions, public transport, road safety

Television, Internet and Mobile Phones: positives and negatives, Internet compared to newspapers and books

Water: importance of clean water, water supply, water should be free, bottled water

Work: same job for life, self-employment, unemployment, work/life balance, technology and work, child labour

常见的雅思写作失分点

准确度欠缺

典型症状:太过的依赖作文模板,句法结构都是千篇一律;若只是一味的使用复杂的英文语法,想要追求长句子但是却不切实际地使用从句,最后就会造成主语以及动词之间的不一致;根本不会正确使用英文的标点符号。

主要病因:雅思官方对作文里最重要的语法要求是:“考生使用语法结构都是多样与准确的”,同时还体现“多样”以及“准确”之间的平衡关系。

对症下药:需要把中国式的语法结构摆脱,大家在平日写作里更多的去练习使用从句和非谓语动词,注意句式的变化,还要积累更多的各种句型和短语。在阅读文章时若发现了好的句式,是可以摘抄记录下同时分析。提高语法的准确性,不要光看大的方面,也要注重细节,可以和同学交换写作练习,互相批改涉及语法的句子,这是提高语法的一个好方法。

词汇贫乏使用不当

典型症状:词汇贫乏,重复使用;刻意使用生僻词汇;对同义词、近义词的词义没有掌握好,造成了用词不当;词组搭配错误。

主要病因:现在的中国考生在词汇上真的走两个极端,若不是词汇匮乏,嬉笑翻来覆去都是使用同样的词汇,缺乏同义替换的能力,肯定就是有很大的词汇量,可以有意识地在文章中堆砌一些难词、生词,但实际上是用词不当。

对症下药:词汇贵精不贵多。大家在平日学习词汇时,还要想想分写作话题积累相关词汇和句型,力求做到用词准确,避免重复。

雅思大作文开头段的写法

1. 采用媒体报道引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前,引起读者思考。

例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.

中山大学最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。】这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

2. 引起读者兴趣的话题。

例如在写关于体罚的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father's Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.

【据报道,在父亲节那天,珠海有个小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的证据也显示,经常遭父母或老师虐待的小孩往往比较内向、悲观、冷漠甚至厌世。近来,关于是否应该废除体罚出现了一场激烈的争论,老师、家长和专家各执一词。】当读者看到这个话题时产生了浓厚的兴趣进而引起了对这件事情的思考。

3. 呈现该话题正反方的观点。

观察观点类题目的特征,我们不难发现,此类题型的特征是题目有且只有一个观点。而题目要求我们回答的是“同意”或“不同意”这个观点。所以只要确定好我们的态度,在开头段表达出来即可。

举个例子:Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

agree:根据“背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点”的公式

These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. 【背景句】 But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. 【直接转述题目】 Personally, I agree with this idea. 【个人观点】

disagree:用“although”的让步状语从句进行改写

These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. 【背景句】 Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, 【although +直接转述题目】 personally, I do not agree with this idea. 【个人观点】

在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。

4. 对将要讨论的话题进行定义。

例如在写到Globalization时,Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

关于"全球化"这个名词,考生并不陌生,但是怎样用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。

备考雅思写作的准备工作

1、首先一定要做好雅思写作词汇短语的积累工作。

大多数考生会有这样的一个误区,他们以为只需要背诵有的参考书上所谓的模板,又去积累一些论据,写作的问题便可以轻松的解决,但却不知道才只是开始。当然在此的积累并不是死记硬背,应该是通过把一个单词的不同形式与它的同义表达等放到了一起记忆便可以轻松的解决。如果碰到一个新词,就要在脑中搜寻它的相关信息,这样一来,就能在考试这么短的时间中马上浮现了。但是一次的记忆是远远不够的,所以适时的重复记忆也非常重要。

2、多看高分范文,同时再针对当中的词汇句型多样性进行总结。

雅思写作机经最重要的是是体现在这其中。大家在备考过程里看范文时一般都只是从整体上学习了它论据的安排,却把细节的词汇句型的运用忽略了,因此大家在上课时也要合理安排时间,将一部分用在对其的讲解上。学生最好准备一本笔记本专门用做记录好词好句和其转换形式。

3、加强雅思写作学习一定要去不断练习和记忆。

经常都有学生提出,作文提高是否只需要多写几篇即可,事实上答案是否定的。我在此表示的加强练习是在一定的基础之上的,相当于大家已基本把雅思写作的各项要求都掌握了。那么这样练习才能有的放矢。通过几次的练习,能检查出学生多样性的掌握情况,并对症下药,了解不足处,在真正考试中能突围而出。

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