雅思作文怎么描述趋势
发布时间:2022-05-12 17:56:47雅思作文怎么描述趋势
雅思小作文主要题型包括图表、流程、饼图等,题目任务是对数据和趋势做描述。那么同学们知道有哪些句型常用来描述趋势吗?
1】 The number increased / rose suddenly / dramatically / rapidly / substantially / considerably / sharply from…to...
2】 During 1990-2000, there was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/ sharp considerable rise/boom in the number of private cars from…to…
3】 The ten years from 1990 to 2000 witnessed / saw a steady growth of private cars from…to…
4】 The number of private cars increased/rose 【fell/dropped/declined/decreased】 by 20%
5】 The number of private cars in 2000 was 5 times more than that in 1990.
6】 The number of private cars was roughly/about/approximately doubled/ tripled between 1990 and 2000.
雅思写作技巧
相信对于同学们来说,简单的“淡妆”是难不倒大家的,想要得高分,必须注意结合“浓妆”,适当加入高级的表示方法。
如:中国的出生率从1920年至1935年上升,之后下降到1940年的5%左右。运用不同级别的词汇句式即可写出如下3种表达方式:
“淡妆”级别:China’s birth rate rose from 1920 to 1935. It then decreased to 1940at about 5%.【用词简单,直接翻译的简单句】
“浓抹”级别:China’s birth rate rose from around 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percentin 1935, and then it fell sharply to somewhere at the vicinity of 5 percent in 1940.【用词调整的并列句】
考官提供范文中也有类似表达:In spite of some fluctuations in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next twodecades in the three countries.【剑5 P162 Model Answer】
“烟熏妆”级别:Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, China’s birth rate then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in 1940.【首先导入分词伴随代替常规的China’s birth rate开头,且用词更高深】;
建议同学们可以根据自己的英语水平,适当的添加这类型的句子,这样能增加亮点,从而提高分数。
当然此类句式也能时常在考官提供的范文中找到:The first potential location is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hin don, lying 12 kms to the north-west.【剑5 P166 Model Answer】
通过以上的分析我们可以看出,句子的表达形式多种多样,同学们在自己能力的基础上运用较复杂的句式更能吸引考官的注意力并取得高分,希望大家在备考时可以多加练习,灵活运用。
雅思作文怎么写开头段
在雅思考试中,雅思写作对于不太擅长逻辑架构的大陆考生来说是取得高分的一大门槛,与雅思考试中的其他几项相比较,写作往往是得分最低的一项。究竟怎样才能写出高分作文,写作要考察我们的能力比较多,这其中包括文章是否扣题,整体逻辑,词汇运用能力以及语法准确度等,想要在一个小时内完成两篇高质量的文章,取得高分着实不易。雅思考官会喜欢什么样的开头段?怎么才能最快速有效地提升自己的写作分数呢?
除了多积累好的词汇和句型,多看范文这项工作也是必不可少的。写作是输出型考试,输出的文字质量是高是低,与我们平时输入多少好的词、好的句子密切相关。所以在这里也特别提醒大家,不要一味地埋头苦写,从不看范文,从不背好的句子。一味埋头苦写无异于只是把自己4分、5分的作文水平练的更加纯熟,练成了钢琴十级跆拳道黑带而已,一定要多读范文,多背好的句子,这样才能真正提高写作水平。俗话说“熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟”,范文的力量,可见一斑。
我们先来看一道机经真题:
Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.
While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
拿到这个题目,很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化形式,笔下的开头是这样的:
Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town, while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
不知道有没有同学“躺枪”,写这种开头的同学,分数绝对不可能高于5.5,整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”,除了套模板,就是照搬原题,考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?我们以剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范文为例,来看看考官自己爱怎么写开头。先来看一下题目:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文的开头是这样的:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
从这篇考官范文的开头,我们不难看出,它并没有模式化的“社会背景引入-提出正方观点-再提出反方观点-最后陈述自己观点”,而是只做了两件事:
一、给核心名词下定义。
在本文中,即是给child’s education下了个定义,谈了一下在作者看来,child’s education是什么样的。
二、表明观点或立场。
在本文中,即阐明孩子的教育问题不仅仅只关乎家长。所以,好的开头可以“无模板,但有逻辑。”
翻翻剑桥雅思考官的范文,我们会发现很多考官在开头段都只干了两件事:下定义+ 表明观点,或者是引出背景+表明观点,还有很多考官范文开头只是引出背景而已。所以,阐述题目中谈及事件的背景才是开头段应该做的,而不是模式化的引出两方观点。
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