雅思口语描述一个名人

雅思口语描述一个名人

名人类话题则是最常考的话题之一也是比较优化可说的。

其实所有part2部分的作答最重要的就是对话题卡的熟悉。因为很多要求和作答信息都在话题卡上。当然前提是在考前做足了准备，能够有话可说，有素材可以介绍。此外，在考试的时候一定要注意发音和流利度的把握，发音这里不多说了，就是多练别无他法。而流利度其实是可以掌握的，只要大家注意意群的划分便能够很好的进行陈述。

下面以具体的例子来看一下名人类话题该如何作答：A foreign celebrity

Describe a foreign celebrity

You should say:

who this foreign celebrity is

what this person does something about this person that attracts you

and explain why you admire this person.

首先，来看一下话题卡，描述一个外国名人。接下来就是提示信息的梳理，其实就是我们的答题线索即思路：这个外国名人是谁——这个名人做了什么事情因此吸引你——解释为什么你很崇拜这个人。其实就是交代具体人物，然后突出名人事件，最后解释你崇拜的原因。所以有了这样的思路其实考生就无需再去过多的思考其他的答题主线，按照这个作答，突出这几个要点，对词汇句式稍加润色便是一片完整的范文。

范文参考及分析：

1. Speaking of a foreign celebrity, I want to talk about Warren Buffett, who is a well- known American investor, businessman and philanthropist.【1.交代了这个外国名人是谁——Warren Buffett】

2. He is CEO of Berkshire Hathaway, one of the largest investment companies in the world. The company features creative investment ideas, a great variety of investment plans, projects and professional investment services.【最大的投资财团】

3. As a legendary figure in this whole industry, Warren Buffett is often invited to be a guest by different TV programmes, magazines and online talk shows. He once said on a TV programme VAN LAN ONE ON ONE, "Well, on the journey of life, it might take years for you to be halfway to the destination, but less than one second to fall back to the very beginning, so there are two rules that everyone should keep in mind. Rule number one: never give up. Rule number two: never forget rule number one. Once you do it, your dream will come true. And you will have your own snowball. And it will get bigger and bigger.” His words inspired me a lot.【杨澜访谈录中说的话】

4. Besides his achievements in business, he has also made grreat contributions to charity. In 2006, he made a commitment to give away his fortune to charity, which broke the donation record in United States history. Besides, he was listed among Time’s 100 Most Influential People in The World in 2007 and ranked by Forbes as the richest man in 2008.【慈善中的作为】

2、3、4三个自然段都是对这个人做的具体事情的陈述，商业成就、说的有影响力的话、以及慈善的投资都是影响巨大的。其实就是对话题卡第二个信息“这个名人做了什么事情因此吸引你”的具体阐述和说明。

5. I admire this person not only because of the person himself, but also because of the things I learned from him.【崇拜不是因为这个人而是因为做过的事情，对最后一个提示信息的说明】

雅思口语描述你喜欢的名人

Describe a famous person you admire.

雅思口语加分表达：

write his own songs自己写歌

record album录制专辑

release CDs发行CD

perform live music现场表演音乐

build a following of people建立了粉丝团

look up to崇拜

inject something into把…注入

ingenious有创意的/有创造性的

范文：

考官【Part2】：Describe a famous person you admire.

考生：Ok, I’m going to talk about a singer that I admire, called Xu Wei. He’s a singer who also plays the guitar and writes his own songs. I think he recorded his first album about 10 years ago, and he’s released several other CDs since then. He became successful after many years of writing songs and performing live music in small venues all over the country. Gradually he built a following of people who liked his music.

The reason I look up to him is that he has worked hard for his success: it takes years of practice to become a good singer and guitarist, and he spent several years playing to very small audiences before he became successful. I also like the fact that he writes his own music and he can inject his own stories and experiences into his music, which makes him quite ingenious. I admire people who have worked hard to get where they are.

雅思口语描述被污染的地方

Describe a place you visited has been affected by pollution

You should say:

• What the place is

• What type of pollution it is/ are

• Cause and effect of pollution

and explain how can this pollution be controlled.

1.适用考生：全适用

2.主题：旅行地污染

3.故事线：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访【……在你的城市/国家……的地区名称】，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。

雅思口语高分范文示例：

Last year I went to visit 【...say an area name in your city/country...】with two of my friends and thought we would enjoy our trip. We heard from a teacher that this was a beautiful place to visit and after that, we planned to go there. To our surprise, this place was severely affected by the pollution and instead of enjoying our trip, we cut it short and returned home immediately.

It was early summer last year and visiting a place near a river which is surrounded by natural beauty and recommended by one of our favourite teachers was an excellent idea, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who suggested this place had no idea about the severity of the pollution there and how things have become worse.

The water pollution was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements that were floating on the water created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled waste management, toxic elements from factories and industries, motorised vehicles running on the water and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the main reasons the water has got polluted. More shockingly, the air pollution was also noticeable. I saw many industries and factories that were exhausting black fumes and that has made the air polluted more than any other part I know about.

Uncontrolled urbanisation, the establishment of new factories & industries without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in government offices are so far the main reasons for increasing pollution in our country. I wish this will stop and we will be conscious enough not to destroy our own inhabitants.

雅思口语描述一个短暂停留的地方

Describe a place you visited but only for a short period of time

You should say:

where you went

who you went with

what you did during the trip

and how you felt about this place.

1.适用考生：全适用

2.主题：去上海出差的经历

3.故事线：去年我和同事去上海出差大约一个星期。那里有一个客户需要一个ERP系统，所以我们搬到那里帮助他们实现一个系统。我是一名物流顾问，负责采购物品和仓库。

雅思口语高分范文示例：

Last year I had been in Shanghai for about a week for a business trip with some colleagues. There was a client there which needed an ERP system, so we moved there to help them implement a system. I was a logistic consultant responsible for purchasing items and warehouses.

Shanghai is a big city in East China. There are many large-scale domestic and foreign corporations so it is easy to seek the business opportunities there. Besides it is also renowned for attractions like the bustling City God Temple, and peaceful Century Park, the gorgeous Yu Garden, and the breath-taking Pudong skyline.

What fascinated me most during that trip was the rich collection of buildings with various architectural styles. The Bund, for example, contains a wealth of well-preserved early 20th-century architecture. And also a large number of eccentric buildings sprung up recently throughout Shanghai, such as the Shanghai Museum. What didn’t appeal to me about Shanghai was that the streets in the city were so cramped and tough to identify compared with the ones in Beijing which are mostly wide and straight.