托福出色范文

在托福考试中，想要取得高分的话，我们要经常去看别人家的范文，这样我们才会提高。

托福出色范文一：

题目：

Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

一些人认为动物园应该被关闭。而其他人认为动物园有利于保护稀有动物。讨论双边观点并给出你的看法。

范文：

Currently, the discussion about whether to close zoos is becoming popular. Some people proclaim that zoos are cruel and all should be closed, on the other hand, towards the same issue, some others are confident that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

People,who advocate that caging animals in zoos are cruel and therefore all of them should be closed, have their sound reasons. The main reason is that keeping animals in captivity goes against animal rights. In addition, man should not believe that he has the disposable power of treating other species. Moreover, it will give bad influences to animals‟ evolution if we keep them in cages for their whole life and they will lose the ability of seeking food themselves.

To begin with, caged animals may lose their natural instinct to seek food, to protect them against natural predators, and to solicit breeding partners. Accordingly, this will lead to a miserable life that they are compelled to accept, rather than willingly to lead. In addition, because bared animals are carefree, they would again lose their in-born abilities that would otherwise enable them to survive and thrive at a natural habitat. Consequently, even when they are freed after being kept in cage for some time they will probably drop the ability to undergo a natural evolution.

There is no denying that there is some truth in the above point of view. However, to some people’s mind, it is useful to protect rare animals of using zoos. Above all, although man is the dominant species on the planet, all species enjoy the same right to survive here, we should respect other life forms by taking every effort we can to prevent the extinction of existing species. For another, zoos are suitable habitats for some species which are on the verge of dying out due to hunting. Finally, in fact, farming animals is much less brutal than the pain and hardship that animals inflict on each other in the wild.

To sum up, we cannot deny that both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, the best way is building natural protect area to replace zoos. Then, we can protect every species no matter they are in extinction, and children can see the vivid life to expand their knowledge, also can keep the ability of animals of seeking food. If there are more natural protect areas, that will be the perfect way for our sustainable development.

托福出色范文二：

题目：

Ambition is an important characteristic of people. How important is it for people to make success in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic for success?

当今社会非常看重一个人是否有“雄心大志”。你认为这对于那些想成功的人士来说有多重要?此类观点是积极还是消极的体现呢?

范文：

In this essay, I shall look at the importance of success to people and at whether ambition is positive or negative.

I think that it is usually beneficial for people to want success in life, mainly because it can encourage them to do things in better ways. If a person wants to be successful at their studies, this desire for success usually has the effect of making them study harder. However, this is not always true. We can see this in IELTS, where some students have hired other people to take the test for them. The importance of success has encouraged them to try to cheat. If this is successful, it means that the successful people are not the ones who are the most capable and hard-working. Instead it means that those willing to behave in illegal or immoral ways will succeed. Of course, these people are a small minority, but they cannot be allowed to succeed.

Consequently, we can see that ambition can be a positive characteristic, pushing people to study harder, work harder and create positive relationships with other people. These things push society forward, both economically and socially. However, there have to be rules. These rules need to ensure that people have a fair chance. Some of these rules can be created and enforced by institutions such as universities, when deciding on admissions for example. Others need to be enforced by government. This is why it is so important for governments to deal with corruption. If they do not, the most capable people are unsuccessful, affecting the whole country.

To conclude, I think that it is good for people to want success and have ambition, so long as they do not cheat to succeed.

托福出色范文三：

题目：

Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?

有人认为经济发展是衡量一个国家成败与否的标准，而其他人则认为还有其他因素可以用来衡量。这些因素是什么?在这些因素中，哪一个是更重要的?

The relative success of different countries is usually defined in economic terms. There are several other factors, apart from the economy, that could be used to assess a country, and in my opinion education is the most important of all.

Standards of education, health and individual human rights should certainly be considered when measuring a country’s status. A good education system is vital for the development of any nation, with schools, colleges and universities bearing the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard of living within a country, and this can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical services. Finally, human rights and levels of equality could be taken into account. For example, a country in which women do not have the same opportunities as men might be considered less successful than a country with better gender equality.

On the other hand, GDP fails to takes account of environmental degradation, insecurity or inequality. During the process of pursuit of economic thriving, many countries pay a high price at environment. For example, behind the expansion of industry and consumption, there are more smog emitted into the air, more running-off chemicals and toxic wastes into rivers and oceans, more wasted paper, plastic bags and one-off goods littering in streets.

In my view, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development. This is because education has a considerable effect on the other two factors mentioned above. It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research. It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other countries, and increased wealth.

In conclusion, nations can be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but I would argue that the standard of a country's education system is the best measure of its success.