托福写作满分作文

在托福考试中，写作想要提高的话，我们平时要多看范文。

托福写作满分作文一：

【1】人一生只有在儿童的几年是最快乐的，应当让儿童享受这种快乐，给他们未来留下好的印象。

【2】儿童玩对性格培养要好

【3】儿童在玩的时候，同样也能够自然的学到很多知识。比如说和宠物一起玩，可以知道爱护动物和自然。

How should children spend their time?

In our rapidly changing world people begin to understand more and more that nothing is so valuable but knowledge. Education has become an important part of people's life. Due to this some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. But others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. To my mind these two views should be balanced so as not to go to the extremes.

The first point of view that children should start early on their studies make me assume that it can be harmful and damaging for a child's physical development and personality. As a teacher I have seen the result of beginning education too early. Children are deprived of the enjoyment of their childhood years and their intrinsic desire to play. Some children cannot concentrate on their study and keep playing at school. Besides, the children who are not allowed to play and are forced to study can begin to detest the education process and the teachers. So, to force children to study at an early age can spoil the whole picture.

When facing the question of early education it is also important to note that children who begin to study at an early age are often overloaded by studying material and homework, which they are not ready to cope with. Besides some parents neglect their children and do not pay enough attention to the children's problems at school thinking that they are still young.

The second opinion that children should play instead of study also has disadvantages. In this case children are not well prepared for their school life at all. They have no idea what he is going to do at school. In addition, research shows that early education can benefit children's brain development and prepare them better for the futures school education. The most important time for early education could be missed if parents do not send their children to school at an appropriate age.

In conclusion I would like to point out that that early education and play should be well balanced so that their enjoyment of childhood that is once in a lifetime would not be deprived. It is quite important for governments to design and implement an appropriate primary education system so that young children can have chances to both learn and play at school.

托福写作满分作文二：

【1】获得更多的信息。一两个朋友的信息是有限的，而很多朋友带来很多信息

【2】有更大的乐趣。开生日PARTY，请很多朋友，这样家里更热闹

【3】能够学习更多人的思维方式，或者团队精神。因为一两个相近朋友的思维比较一样，而

未来我们要和很多不同的人一起工作，很很多朋友在一起对于培养思维和团队精神很有帮助。

One or two friends, or many friends?

I cannot imagine a person who hasn’t enjoyed the company of a friend. Friends are very precious and therefore, we constantly love and cherish them. Spending time with friends has always been regarded as a wonderful thing to do with no doubt. However, one might choose to spend time either with one or two close friends or a number of friends.

Certainly, there is a difference between the enjoyment gained by spending time with our few close friends and the delight obtained by hanging out with many friends. When we are spending time with our close friends, we can feel a special closeness and bond with them. With the company of intimate friends, we can be more open and true to ourselves. Although with few people around the scope of our activities is limited, it is compensated by the satisfaction that we gained from the warm atmosphere.

If a person doesn’t like the joy attained from the company of just few close friends and wants to extend his activities with more friends, he can choose to spend time with many friends. When a group of friends gather together they can engage in many group activities such as playing games and sports, and travel to new places. This enjoyment doesn’t necessarily require close relations among the group members. Being sociable and outgoing is good enough to create a pleasant ambiance for everyone.

I’d rather choose to spend my time with one or two close friends than being with a number of friends. With my close friends around we don’t really have to do anything in particular together. For us the significance lies in the fact that we are together, sharing our time. As the saying goes, “I can spend hours without uttering a single word with my friend and I’d have the best conversation ever..”

托福写作满分作文三：

关于whether R. robustus is active hunter of dinasaurs. 一个叫R.的生物胃里面发现了恐龙的残骸，于是科学家们争论它是不是恐龙Hunter或者只是食腐动物

There have been dramatic changes in people’s lives in the 21st century, especially for the world's youths. The challenges they face are fierce and range from personal problems to work-related issues. As a result, some sociologists argue that compared to young people in the past, young people today encounter more distinct challenges in more diverse areas of their lives. I cannot agree more.

Initially, with the advancement of science and the development of technologies such as the Internet, personal challenges have shifted patterns. Take dating as an example: in the past, people got to know each other mainly through middlemen or day to day encounters, and their contacts were limited. Thus there were fewer opportunities to compare individuals, and this decreased the chances for an individual to find someone suitable. Nowadays, with so many online dating platforms such as Zhen’ai and Baihe, people can easily get in touch with one another, which greatly increase people’s range of choices. Besides, the Internet also allows people to get to know each other virtually before deciding whether to meet, which greatly reduces awkward situations.

Secondly, the economic boom also altered the work-related challenges faced by the youngsters. An example would be the job seeking process. In China, decades ago, people’s job allocations were mainly determined by state or local governments. This was especially true for college students. As a result, there was no need to worry about finding a job. But today it is different. College graduates swarm all over the country, and they have to find jobs on their own and compete with numerous counterparts. The number of well-paid jobs is quite limited. According to a recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, nearly 7 million college students are graduating in 2013, and so far only one fourth of those have found jobs. It was also mentioned by some educators that this year would be the hardest time for job hunting due to both the exploding number of students and the limited number of qualified candidates.

To sum up, under the dual influences of science and technological progress as well as economic development, personal or work-related problems confronted by young people today are quite different from those of the past. 【By Zou Shunpeng】

托福写作基本句式：

1、表示原因

1】There are three reasons for this.

2】The reasons for this are as follows.

3】The reason for this is obvious.

4】The reason for this is not far to seek.

5】The reason for this is that...

例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

2、表示好处

1】It has the following advantages.

2】It does us a lot of good.

3】It benefits us quite a lot.

4】It is beneficial to us.

5】It is of great benefit to us.

例如： Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

3、表示坏处

1】It has more disadvantages than advantages.

2】It does us much harm.

3】It is harmfulto us.

例如：However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also

4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1】It is important【necessary,difficult,convenient,possible】for sb.to do sth.

2】We think it necessary to do sth.

3】It plays an important role in our life.