托福写作满分模板

一个模板刚刚出现，有可能明天就有100个人在用了，你想想当考官看到100个人写出来的作文都用同样的开头的时候，他将会是什么情景。当然这里指的是国外的考官。那你知道托福写作满分模板吗?

托福写作满分模板：

Nowadays， thanks to the development of Internet， we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me， the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I， given the chance， prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.

当看到第一篇文章的时候，已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了!首先Nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词。一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。然后thanks to节宾语，天呐!多么明显的模板!当我往下看的时候，我只能无意识的检查是否有语法错误，没有语法错误的话，我也就只能给个一般的分数就好了。

但是当看到第二篇文章的时候，初看觉得此文写得不错。用词准确地道，而且完全是自己完成没有模板，但是当我回头再一回味这篇文章的时候，惊讶的发现，这篇文章竟然也是由模板所出!首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education。看似平淡无奇，但是实际上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一个模板，更厉害的是下一句!Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.这么长的一句话，竟然只有最后3个单词不是模板!

托福写作开头段模板：

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to xx【ex:people's success】 as xx【ex: education】.

Despite various responses people may have on the topic that xx【 ex:which thing should the education aim at】.

I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that xx【ex:preparing for careers should have primary

consideration.】

Asked what...will do to ..., some xx【ex:teachers】 may answer: xx.

Admittedly, xx plays a vital part in xx【ex:person’s success and happiness】.But actually, I think that...

适用于agree or disagree的问题 。

Adj【Marvelous】 as it looks at first sight, xx【ex：modern technology】 does not xx【ex:help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency 】 in most cases; or it could work towards the opposite direction which led xx【ex:students to lose their initiative to learn and explore.】

怎么获得托福写作满分：

一、举实例

思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.

二、换言之

没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.

I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.

或者上面我们举过的例子：

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.

因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.

托福考试写作满分评分标准：

要点 1:selects the important information from the lecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading

要点 2:well organized

标准解读:

这里的组织既包含行文的组织要系统、有逻辑性,也包含了上文中讲到的要准确地把听力要点和阅读要点进行“matching”【匹配】的含义。

要点 3:occasional language errors

标准解读:

托福作文允许有错误存在。most一词表明一篇满分文章需要避免绝大部分的语法、用词错误。 同时这也表明个别的语法错误、用词不当以及诸如拼写,标点符号和大小写等错误不影响一篇文章得满分。 对于托福综合写作来说,更重要的是文章的要点明确、逻辑通畅,语言的整体高水平。