托福写作话题健康与环境

托福写作话题健康与环境

今天，给大家分享托福写作环境与环境话题，它经常作为独立话题考察，同时又可以用作其他话题的辅助论点，因此本期依然会按照逻辑因果链的方式为大家介绍素材。

环境类

逻辑链条：

环境问题背景 & 现状

造成这种现象的原因---导致----结果

解决方案

背景&现状

The boom/flourishing/thriving/prospering of economy

At the sacrifice/cost/price of

The environment is strikingly/alarmingly deteriorating

Densely/severely polluted/contaminated

前因

Discharge/emit/release emission into air/the atmosphere

Pour wasted water into rivers

Logging

Hunting precious animals mercilessly

Overexploitation of fossil fuels

导致【原因导致结果】

Trigger/contribute to/lead to/bring about/cause/result in/give rise to

Be responsible for/be the key culprit of

Take a toll on

归咎于【结果归咎于原因】

Attribute to/result from/ascribe to/blame... on...

后果

Global warming

Haze/smog---【increase the likelihood/chance/possibility of】 respiratory diseases

Degradation of water supplies & the death of aquatic life

Deforestation/biological diversity

方案

Adopt/implement/enforce---policy/regulation

Enhance public’s environment awareness

Promote/boost/stimulate

Hinder/hamper/impede

Promote alternative sources of energy

Develop new and clean energy like solar energy, wind power and tidal power

…… might seem insignificant on individual level, but it can make a big difference collectively.

健康类

逻辑链条：

原因--结果

饮食不健康

Unhealthy dietary habit/unwholesome eating habit/unbalanced diet

Profit-driven businessman--Sugarcoat--Mediocre vs Appealing ---consumers will, consciously or not, ……

Fast food contains too much fat, sugar and calorie.

Excessive consumption/intake of....

Be physically detrimental/be health-threatening/undermine one’s health

Obesity, overweight

Be on diet---malnutrition

Sub-health

生活习惯

Be overwhelmed with/be bombarded with/be flooded by piles of/tons of /endless assignments

Barely/seldom/rarely can..., not to mention/let alone...

托福写作环境类话题范文

托福写作环境类话题题目：

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed【damaged】 by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福写作范文：

While the past few centuries have witnessed increasingly better quality of human life,human activity is doing more and more harm to the Earth.Natural resources are being depleted and pollution is being created as a result of

development of technology .Natural areas are being damaged as a result of urban expansion to populate more people.

首段摆明观点，并利用while句式，强调观点“ the Earth is being harmed【damaged】 by human activity.”。

First,we harm the Earth by using more and more natural resources.If we fell too many trees at one time to build houses and make paper,or if we cut down trees before they grow to maturity,they can hardly grow back in time.As worrisomeas overcutting of trees is overfishing.With improved technology and greater drive of money,fish of all kinds are being over hunted,reducing the biomass of some fish to the verge of extinction.Whaling seems a most irksome issue.While mostcountries argue against it,some countries go whaling to extreme.We often take it for granted that we have unlimited natural resources and use them in a wasteful manner,bringing about great losses.

从人类活动消耗越来越多的资源角度来阐明观点。举例有overcutting of trees以及overfishing.

Second,we damage the Earth by producing pollution in all forms.Factories pollute water and the air.Vehicles pollute the air.Nuclear- related and electronic products are playing an increasing big role in polluting the air,especiallywhen we dispose the related waste carelessly.We take for granted that the Nature can help clean everything,but it can not.

分论点：人类活动污染大气和水资源。

Third，expanding towns and cities are taking up more and more land.As populations flood to cities，new houses and stores have to be built to accommodate their needs.Land that was good for farming has now become factories andapartment buildings.We seem to take it for granted that we have unlimited land ,but we don not.

In summary,human activity seems to be going at the expense of the Earth in various ways.However,our survival depends on the Earth,including natural areas and natural resources,so we have to venerate the earth.

托福写作素材之词汇

witness vt. 目击;证明;为…作证

deplete vt. 耗尽，用尽;使衰竭，使空虚

populate vt. 居住于;构成人口;移民于;殖民于

grow to maturity长到成熟

as worrisome as ... is...和...一样令人担忧的是...

the biomass of some fish生物量【专业词汇】

to the verge of...到...的边缘

irksome adj. 令人厌烦的，讨厌的;令人厌恶的

accommodate vt. 容纳;使适应;供应;调解vi. 适应;调解

at the expense of 以...为代价

venerate vt. 崇敬，尊敬

快速提升托福写作的方法

一. 首先要确立论点

托福大作文写作首先要确立论点，确立论点是写好文章的第一步。不确立论点，文章论述就没有中心和要点，也无法展开论述。

二. 写作之前先构思

在开始写作之前要先构思一下，构思的主要内容包括，文章要写什么，怎么写，要举出什么样的例子，列举什么样的原因。写作之前尽量给自己一个短暂的构思环节，时间把控在3分钟之内，不要构思太久，不然写作时间就不够了。

三. 列出文章提纲

这一点也很重要，当你完成构思以后，文章的提纲基本就已经出来了，此时可以在草稿纸上列出你的提纲，不需要非常详尽，中英文都可以。列出提纲后，文章的框架就定下来了，接下来就要进入文章的写作环节，让框架变的丰满。

四. 文章不要写的很空洞

文章空洞与否主要看你在写作中给出的原因和例子是否具有很强的说服力。当你选择一个论点时，无论支持与否，都要根据论点来展开论述。想要拿到高分的话，至少要写出三个分论点来支持主论点，每个分论点都要列出有说服力的理由或例子。

五. 通篇文章要切题

文章的切题与否会直接影响你的大作文分数。托福大作文一般会给出论述的题目，选择一方论点以后，可以正面论述，也可以正反对比论述，但切忌写一些超出题目范畴的内容。另外，就算遇到自己做过的原题也不要直接用范文，如果被考官发现直接使用范文，分数肯定不会高。如果题目中刚遇到生词不理解考题的意思，尽量结合上下文语境猜词。

六. 写完以后尽量检查

检查很重要，即便是我们写汉语文章还经常会出现错别字或句法错误，更何况是写英文文章。写完后一定要检查一遍，改正语法和词汇拼写错误。此时就要看大家的语法功底了，所以托福备考过程中学习语法也是相当有用的。检查文章的时间控制在1-3分钟即可。

七. 保证文章质量

很多同学在写托福大作文的时候一味追求字数，其实托福大作文更看重的是文章的质量。字数只要不低于字数要求的最低标准即可，写文章不要写空话，提高文章内容质量才是得高分的关键。

八. 不要只写简单句

托福大作文考察大家的英文写作能力，如果写作中只用一些像口语表达那样的简单句，分数肯定不会高的。写作中应该多尝试使用连接词，让作文的表达句式变的多样化，这样写作分数才有可能会提高。

九. 了解托福写作话题

托福写作有一些高频常考类的话题，这些话题类型是备考的重点。考试前一定要对这些话题有个清晰了解，并且准备一些对应话题的写作素材。所谓“知彼知己”，我们不仅要对自身实力有了解，还要了解托福大作文考题类型，这样才能在稳中求胜。

十. 考前做限时练习

托福大作文是有时间限制的，所以考试前一定要模拟真实考试场景，掐着时间写作，看看自己是否能在考试要求的时间内完成。如果时间不够，大家要考虑一下哪些环节可以提速，提前让自己适应考试节奏。